SALT BROWN MELTED GIRAFFE GREASY
So in the weekend I walked to the zoo I loved it there I got to see the salt water Crocodiles and the brown bears It was so much fun!.Once we were done with the animals we went to the cafe in the middle of the zoo I looked out the window we could see the two Giraffes I loved their brown spots I ordered the Giraffe cookies and when the waiter came over was also carrying some Greasy chips and the grease got onto the Giraffe cookies and melted them now I hate them.
Dear Levi
Very good, I do believe that I like the Mau Mau fairy better then this though.I like how you wrote it as a recount.
From Molly